tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3519835595536748904.post2339845117664559452..comments2023-10-28T00:25:50.019-07:00Comments on Fallen Words: When Mama isn't Happywriterwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3519835595536748904.post-80731187970775046832007-05-14T03:46:00.000-07:002007-05-14T03:46:00.000-07:00Hi Sara, I thought this blog was only for stories ...Hi Sara, I thought this blog was only for stories and I haven't been for a visit in a while. I wish you the best of luck on your poem entry-I really enjoyed it. I rarely thought of how difficult life must be for a mother until I left for college and came home. Then I realized all I had taken for grantit. Your poem is very clear about that and yet so poetic using the right words and great descriptions and metaphors.Clockworkchrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09889793842709699969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3519835595536748904.post-17059137079277622142007-05-05T14:42:00.000-07:002007-05-05T14:42:00.000-07:00Thanks, Ray. You know, today I am not feeling very...Thanks, Ray. <BR/><BR/>You know, today I am not feeling very lucky. Like the poem seems about. Today is one of those bad, hard days for me ( not writing related though). But, as the poem says, there is no time to stop and wallow in that.....in the grand scheme of it all I am lucky.<BR/><BR/>But, today, I feel....like I really want it to be tommorow already.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Thank you so much for commenting. This blog could use a lot more active participation from members and the world at large. I suppose in time we will see if it lasts or not. At least, I can count on you ( and some others). It means a lot.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Sarawriterwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3519835595536748904.post-88935460641701098862007-04-29T21:18:00.000-07:002007-04-29T21:18:00.000-07:00I like this, Sara! It's the kind of poem you need ...I like this, Sara! It's the kind of poem you need to read over and over, one that sticks in your mind.The Wandering Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404559867270050616noreply@blogger.com